Authors Note: Be prepared for a crazy day(s) with Sam. She has messed up and she needs help to save the day(s).
The cause of this: Sam messes up so many times. The world decides to give her as many chances as she needed. When she realizes she has screwed up all of her opportunities, she doesn't know how to fix it.
The affect this had was: Sam is trapped in the same day. Keeps reliving it and has no idea how to fix it. She has to find a way to figure it out and help herself. She is stuck. And now she has no way of getting back to normal time. When she fixes things with her family, friends, teachers, and boy friend thing return to normal. And the day goes on as planned.
You have really good word choice in this piece. What is the resolution of your piece?
ReplyDeleteYou might want to try watching out for sentence fragments, like this sentence: Keeps reliving it and has no idea how to fix it. You did a pretty good job explaining the cause and effect, but try to use supporting details from the book and write at least two paragraphs. Good job.
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